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Tossing and Turning - Part 1 by timothylgreen Tossing and Turning - Part 1 by timothylgreen
This is the first in a new bedroom set that I am doing with Laura.

I can't wait to see them all done and together.
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I definitely like this shot. Here's why.

Firstly the model is just stunning. A stunning model isn't enough for a good image, but it certainly helps.

Tim was clever enough in this shot to keep his depth of field reasonably deep. A great choice. The purpose of this shot isn't for us to gaze into the model's eyes like a portrait (me reading the photographer's mind. Sorry Tim) It is to present a bodyscape that just melts in one's mind. So letting us see the shoes to her eyes all in focus is a great choice.

The lighting is superb. I have always said that we look to the part of the picture where the light is different. Putting the model's face slightly in shadow is a great choice. It lets the highlight in her eyes stand out. It gives us a light scape to follow.

Normally when I take a portrait I focus on the eyes. I am not sure Tim did this in this shot. And I can see why. We don't need her eyes terribly sharp. The curve of her panties on her hip and the delicate patterns have all been preserved because of Tim's focus point. Great choice.

Back to the lighting for a moment. The angle of the light is just perfect. It shows the musculature of the model's tummy and ribs, and gives a lovely tonality across her legs. Love it.

Normally I would disagree with shoes in a bed. For me it often looks too staged which puts me off (my preference is for shots that look as real as possible).
Here I think the shoes in this case though are a great addition. They refine the possible readings we can make of this image (what we think the image means. Academic speak oop)

Without shoes, a woman lounges on a bed. Could be the girl next door, could be anyone. The inclusion of these particular shoes though evokes for me the idea that this woman was just recently in a black dress. Or something similar. That this is a woman with class and style. And that she has left her shoes on could mean she's in a hurry. Who knows.

And this is the thing; all images that really grab me have a story. They tell me something. My mind plays with what I see and tries to assign meaning.

And I think that is what I really like about this image. The model's angle in the bed so that she is leaning towards us down the length of the picture; her expression; The fall off of light; the empty side of the bed on the other side. These are all excellent composition choices.

And finally to choose the white sheets to contrast against the brown of the model's skin also keeps the image simple. I don't find myself distracted by other parts of the image. This is all about the model and it is without doubt one of my favourite shots on DA.

I would provide some criticism so that Tim can improve, but I can't find a single thing to comment about except that perhaps I'd probably clone out the vertical wall join on the other side of the bed against the wall since it doesn't contribute to the picture. Ok, so I found one thing.

Until I mentioned it, did anyone even notice the back wall?
That's how good this image is.
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BartOganes Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
jezzafox Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
amazing capture
Loopol Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
All the spirit of the glamorous photo is here!
legolassx Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
gran disparo
oO-Monkey-Oo Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist
What a shot!
nerveZero Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the tone and contrast in this. Great shot. Fabulous model.

Pose and expression are perfect.
55HotGirlLover33 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
What a beautiful girl
heartache33 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
I love these two pictures - you create a great sense of yearning, tension and desire.
AriesRah Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Wonderful lighting on this beautiful model. The pose is so simple yet so sexy!
timothylgreen Featured By Owner May 7, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so very Much!
I tend to put a lot of Time into making the photos look the way I like. I am glad to see that others appreciate my style also.
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timothylgreen Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you! I appreciate it.
LADYJIN Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome ^^
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Shane-Sky-Walker Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
Very nice pic! I love the contrast against the white and the black heels are a really nice touch!
timothylgreen Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you, the next photo is the serious is going to be great, should be up later today.
Shane-Sky-Walker Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
Loved both of the pics!!! Absolutely, amazing!
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