I think its a beautiful photo and I like it all, but I can see a problem. In the chest you can see lighter skin, which concentrates your attention on that because she has light chocolate skin and here shes white what focuses my attention on that point. I think her face its beautiful because her features are clear. I like the way her hair looks and the clothes are beautiful and bright. I dont know if have explain what I was trying to say because I normaly dont talk in english, but I hope this helps you to improve.
She is incredible! She has no reason to be self conscious at all, what a beauty of the highest order. And I love the fact that you see areas not tanned, incredibly sexy. I only wish I was handsome, charming, and exactly what she wanted.